Your stuff reminds me of Kevin Moore (of Chroma Key, O.S.I., ex-Dream Theater). But that's a good thing! I like the restrainted vocals.
As the fellow below, this beat is pretty damn cool... but it just goes on an on. There's not much diversity in the melody here. Keep working on evolving sounds!
I recognize the melody. It came straight from Mixcraft's library. You get a three for arranging the pieces together, as should be bluntly obvious to anyone looking at their placement titles. The missing seven points is because, well, you really didn't make this, and you didn't even source that it came from Mixcraft. Even Mixcraft sourced who created the audio piece.
A three on ten is a fail, pal.
The vocals sound a bit mixed, or maybe that's just my not so good hearing. I'm going to go with the positive assumption that it's not mixed, and say that I like this piece of work. The guitar is very nice and clean, and the drums don't hide in the background too much or burst in your face either. Overall, I like this.
Is that family conversation I hear in the background? Heheh.
I guess. The performance was done at school.
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